Looks like it's coming together fine with no help from me. Stick with the same old recipe: Tweak till done. Makes me think of one I wrote a long time ago that goes in the opposite direction: "Somebody Else's Blues." The gist: Everything's dandy, but I feel lousy anyhow. The bad news is, it turned out David Bromberg had an even older one called "Someone Else's Blues." Luckily, the two songs don't have much else in common. We gave the concept totally different spins. Close call, though!