That time I wrote a Bruce Springsteen song-"Redeemed"

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  1. blowtorch

    blowtorch Telefied Ad Free Member

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    Written directly after having read this:
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    I think a chorus like Am F C G Am F C G G would be a little stronger. Nice little riff on the C chord and the break and then coming back low with the tremolo.
     
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    Thanks Mjark, I'll try that idea this weekend. I bet this one was written around 20 years ago
     
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    Sounds great to me.
     
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    So, this works great! It improves the song. Thank you.
     
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