Looking for critics and comments - my first effort at internet collaboration. Probably not what most here are into and not what I usually play but had to get it out of my head. After at least 25 re-writes. In my basement with Mixcraft, Focusrite 2i4, JBL 305. Telecaster into a tube head, JBL D120 miked, Cube 60 COSM direct - from each amp into a Boss Chorus pedal stereo to RHS/LHS of the 2i4. Great fretless part created by my Bass guy from the Sixties, now down south. I like it with just a kick, may also add a different section into the middle to be less boring.