Oh My Maria, Mama Mia - Original Music, seeking your expertise and feedback. In thanksgiving and in honor of our Blessed Mother Mary.

[Rene Asologuitar]

Greetings!!!
Here's an original composition, written in honor of our Blessed Virgin Mary, Mother of God, and our dearest Heavenly Mother.
Also written in thanksgiving for a safe and magical trip to Morelia, Mexico, and for a beautiful and holy wedding of our son Enrico and Rocio. Also a tribute of thanks and appreciation to the Jacinto and Carranza families of Morelia, Mexico.

Pls provide your expertise and feedback, any comment is much appreciated.
Haver a blessed day!!!
Rene



p.s: special thanks to "studio", who welcomed me in this forum with open and outstretched arms, with pure warmth and honesty, and obvious heartfelt care for others.
"studio" and myself, are in the process of troubleshooting an issue in my recordings, which he dug in and got me deep into the intricacies of recording and production. "studio" - you are much appreciated!!! Thank you again!!!

 

[studio]

Nice song indeed. You have a voice that sounds good
when coupled with that nylon string guitar!
Both are on that mellow side of things.
I would like to hear that song recorded with
a ribbon mic for an even smoother tone if that
is even possible!

Your studio sounds very conducive towards
the style of music you have shown us.
How does it sound to you when you're recording?

Again, this song would sound good during
festivals honoring The Virgin Mary IMO.
This song would go over well during those occasions.

My favorite Mary quote:
(during the wedding where He turns water to wine)
The Gospel of John the Apostle Chapter 2:5
His mother said to the servants, “Whatever He says to you, do it.”

 

[Rene Asologuitar]

Nice song indeed. You have a voice that sounds good
when coupled with that nylon string guitar!
Both are on that mellow side of things.
I would like to hear that song recorded with
a ribbon mic for an even smoother tone if that
is even possible!

Your studio sounds very conducive towards
the style of music you have shown us.
How does it sound to you when you're recording?

Again, this song would sound good during
festivals honoring The Virgin Mary IMO.
This song would go over well during those occasions.

My favorite Mary quote:
(during the wedding where He turns water to wine)
The Gospel of John the Apostle Chapter 2:5
His mother said to the servants, “Whatever He says to you, do it.”

Hi studio,
Success on my part. I was able to upload your re-mixed version (saved as mp4 using 4k downloader), and I uploaded into YouTube again (released as private).

When I am recording, I do not monitor my sound via earphones, I just hear myself and the guitar with my room acoustics. I do have a ribbon mic, but I am not liking the quality of the mic. I will play with the ribbon mic again, and see what you are leading to.

Hey, the "wedding in Cana" is the gospel reading yesterday. And our Deacon, who is a Presbyterian convert, was stating that, growing up, he missed on all the graces and intercessions of our Blessed Mother Mary, as his upbringing was missing the focus on Mary. Mary is our intercessor and the is our main bridge to Jesus!
You are "on-point" and accurately depict the gist of my song.
Have a blessed day!
Respectfully,

 

[Rene Asologuitar]

Correction on my part:
"studio" did not touch this recording, he did re-mix my recording of "Shadows Vanished, Darkness Banished" song which, for some reason, I am having problems downloading via "4k downloader".
Thanks again "studio!!!

 

[GoldieLocks]

Great recording.
Amusing that you put your voice about 80% in the Left channel. Got a reason for that?

 

[Rene Asologuitar]

Hi GoldieLocks,
I have been trying to pinpoint the cause of my left-right sound issue.
For the longest time, I have been plagued by this discrepancy.
"studio" finally stepped in, and assisted me in my new set-up, and I think I corrected my left-right sound problem.
I should be ok from now on. Thanks to "studio", and all the education I got on Audio and Recording.
Thanks for the feedback.
Rene