I've written a lot of lyrics but...

Discussion in 'Bad Dog Cafe' started by MDent77, Sep 3, 2017.

  1. kafka

    kafka Tele-Afflicted

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    The problem with Redneck Crazy is that it's not really complete. I get that it's supposed to be humorous, but it's so sparse in cleverness that it just comes across as humorless screed. The composer takes 2 or 3 interesting turns of phrase and then milks them for 3 1/2 minutes. The rest is just formulaic self-pity.
     
  2. charlie chitlin

    charlie chitlin Doctor of Teleocity Silver Supporter

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    I have one like that, but it's a JOKE

    I love you so much I can't help myself
    I get so jealous when I see you with someone else
    Now I've got a parole stipulation keeping me away from you.

    The OP's quoted tune is, unfortunately, an example of what we have sunk to.
     
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