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Haiku

Discussion in 'Bad Dog Cafe' started by 2 Headed Goat, Mar 18, 2017.

  1. teletimetx

    teletimetx Poster Extraordinaire

    Jul 25, 2011
    Houston, TX
    Reefing the skysail
    In the blinding rain was zen,
    But zen again, knot.
     
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  2. Doug 54

    Doug 54 Poster Extraordinaire

    Dec 12, 2004
    Ohio
    California
    A state in the USA
    Fender Music Man

    .
     
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  3. String Tree

    String Tree Doctor of Teleocity

    Dec 8, 2010
    Up North
    BEing of sound mind
    chasing Tone for all my days
    I must change my strings
     
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  5. 4pickupguy

    4pickupguy Poster Extraordinaire

    May 12, 2013
    Fort Worth, Texas
    I've become my dad
    My patience wears oh so thin
    Dan Electro shrill
     
  6. String Tree

    String Tree Doctor of Teleocity

    Dec 8, 2010
    Up North
    Finding a picture
    No room for a thousand words
    What does all this Meme?
     
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  7. PapaBeef

    PapaBeef Friend of Leo's

    Mar 1, 2004
    EN JAY
    My son Slappy recently stuck this to our refrigerator:

    Haiku is easy
    But they don't always make sense
    Refrigerator
     
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  8. String Tree

    String Tree Doctor of Teleocity

    Dec 8, 2010
    Up North
    Haiku and Drinking
    It will never make much sense
    I vomit freely
     
  9. Anode100

    Anode100 Tele-Afflicted

    May 9, 2014
    Behind my beard.
    Maple and Rosewood.
    Alder and Mahogany.
    Discuss these no more.
     
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  10. CyrusF

    CyrusF TDPRI Member

    Age:
    21
    69
    Nov 12, 2016
    Illinois
    To my lead singer:
    Don't touch my volume control.
    This is a rock band.
     
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  11. CyrusF

    CyrusF TDPRI Member

    Age:
    21
    69
    Nov 12, 2016
    Illinois
    This is the greatest classical irony since Pride and Prejudice.
     
  12. Anode100

    Anode100 Tele-Afflicted

    May 9, 2014
    Behind my beard.
    Please spend my money,
    Searching for the greatest tone,
    Has become so dear.
     
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  13. P Thought

    P Thought Poster Extraordinaire

    I like John Mayer.
    I think he is talented.
    Fire away, haters.
     
  14. Sleepyscholar

    Sleepyscholar TDPRI Member

    70
    Mar 2, 2015
    Nagoya, Japan
    It is not
    syllables but
    mora you know

    Your 'haiku'
    Are far too long
    Be concise

    (1 English syllable = 1, 2 or 3 mora)
     
  15. Obsessed

    Obsessed Doctor of Teleocity

    Nov 21, 2012
    Montana
    Bumched shrits and cargo shorts
    Telecasterites
    We are a hell of a group
     
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  16. Bakeacake08

    Bakeacake08 TDPRI Member

    Age:
    32
    81
    Jul 23, 2016
    Seattle
    Need a new lyric.
    Should I make it a haiku?
    Nope, it won't work. Dang.
     
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  17. 2 Headed Goat

    2 Headed Goat Tele-Meister

    354
    Jul 28, 2012
    Here & Now
    Les Paul or Tele?
    Me, I prefer the latter
    Twang, snarl and chime
     
  18. NashvilleDeluxe

    NashvilleDeluxe Tele-Meister

    451
    May 10, 2007
    Laurentians, Quebec
    Sigh. All American Haiku. You need syllables of 5-7-5 AND mention of the changing of seasons metaphorical to the human coil. Fine! If you insist...I will right your wrongs:

    Fissure
    Equinox clouds lift
    Scalloped bracing shifts its paws
    Dreadnought spruce splinters
     
  19. ravindave_3600

    ravindave_3600 Friend of Leo's

    Apr 30, 2004
    Newly Indiana
    Today spring has come
    lively, blooming, echoing.
    Yes, reverb is sweet
     
  20. Guran

    Guran Friend of Leo's

    Mar 20, 2007
    Sweden
    TDPRI
    One morning in early spring
    Skateboard memories
     
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