Brand new song rough draft Starlight.

Discussion in 'Twanger Central' started by flatpickerjohn, Feb 11, 2019.

  1. flatpickerjohn

    flatpickerjohn TDPRI Member

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    let me know if its a keeper
     
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    24 track Doctor of Teleocity Silver Supporter

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    I'm not a strong one for the genre , and I hear where you want to take this
    the guitar parts and the rhythm sound reminecent of the Byrds, thats a good thing, the instruments dont crowd each other tonally, the drums do sound subdued in the mix although the snare comes up front,
    you've got something there so be really critical when mixing it , the lyrics and the hook are good, and for a rough take you are about 85% of the way there, to where you want to take it.

    this is my first impression, listening to it for the first time

    well done and have fun with it
     
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    Good stuff John; very nice.
     
  4. flatpickerjohn

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    Thanks for the feedback, the drums are courtesy of Boss Dr Rhythm . I am going record it with real musicians eventually. I appreciate the reference to the Byrds,especially after watching the wrecking crew.
     
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