New powerballad posted

LesStrat · December 22nd, 2007, 06:07 PM

...to our band page. Lemme know whatcha think.

www.myspace.com/teknontheou7

bobthecanadian · December 23rd, 2007, 12:20 AM

LesStrat,

First off, welcome to the forum. I hope you have a great time here. There are a lot good folks here and more great information that you can shake a stick at.

About your tunes, sorry bro, I couldn't get past the organ. I also don't hear anything I haven't heard before. If it was me I may just start from scratch.

The second song (Hold On) is a lot better. The arrangement is better, as are the lyrics.

The third song (Save Me) also works well. All the parts work together and the lyric is pretty good.

Overall, the first song sounds like something you were doing as a personal expression of your faith. The second and third songs sound more like creative expressions. Good efforts.

Thanks for postin' and showing what you are doing. I look forward to hearing more from you.

Peace,

Bob

PS - As this is guitar forum I would like to add that I think the guitar parts sound pretty good (both recording and playing). Good on ya' mate!

StuH · December 23rd, 2007, 08:04 AM

I like your voice quite alot. Your vocals would really shine here if you put a low pass filter on the keys track with a smidgeon more reverb. Maybe some sultry licks over top of the keys intro. They fit but seem a bit too high other than that it pretty good.

LesStrat · December 25th, 2007, 01:08 PM

Thank you for your feedback, gentlemen.

Actually, I'm just the guitarist in this band. I sing, but we have to lead vocalists already. Maybe in the future, but I am the newest member of the band.

December 22nd, 2007, 06:07 PM	#1 (permalink)
LesStrat TDPRI Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: New Iberia, LA Posts: 28	New powerballad posted ...to our band page. Lemme know whatcha think. www.myspace.com/teknontheou7 __________________ Let the words of my mouth and the meditations of my heart be pleasing to You.

December 23rd, 2007, 12:20 AM	#2 (permalink)
bobthecanadian Tele-Afflicted Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Taipei, Taiwan Age: 42 Posts: 1,536	LesStrat, First off, welcome to the forum. I hope you have a great time here. There are a lot good folks here and more great information that you can shake a stick at. About your tunes, sorry bro, I couldn't get past the organ. I also don't hear anything I haven't heard before. If it was me I may just start from scratch. The second song (Hold On) is a lot better. The arrangement is better, as are the lyrics. The third song (Save Me) also works well. All the parts work together and the lyric is pretty good. Overall, the first song sounds like something you were doing as a personal expression of your faith. The second and third songs sound more like creative expressions. Good efforts. Thanks for postin' and showing what you are doing. I look forward to hearing more from you. Peace, Bob PS - As this is guitar forum I would like to add that I think the guitar parts sound pretty good (both recording and playing). Good on ya' mate! __________________ It don't mean a thang if it ain't got that TWANG!!!

December 25th, 2007, 01:08 PM	#4 (permalink)
LesStrat TDPRI Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: New Iberia, LA Posts: 28	Thank you for your feedback, gentlemen. Actually, I'm just the guitarist in this band. I sing, but we have to lead vocalists already. Maybe in the future, but I am the newest member of the band. __________________ Let the words of my mouth and the meditations of my heart be pleasing to You.

December 23rd, 2007, 08:04 AM	#3 (permalink)
StuH Tele-Afflicted Join Date: May 2006 Location: Yukon, Canada Age: 38 Posts: 1,466 12 Photos	I like your voice quite alot. Your vocals would really shine here if you put a low pass filter on the keys track with a smidgeon more reverb. Maybe some sultry licks over top of the keys intro. They fit but seem a bit too high other than that it pretty good.