What do you think about this production?

[Telewanger]

Any feedback would be great!

Would anyone that you know buy a song like this one? Vocals and left speaker acoustic guitar recorded in Norway. The rest was recorded here in my little North Carolina bedroom / studio.

What do you think?

1999 Standard Tele for the electric tones.

http://www.soundclick.com/player/sin...=10923793&q=hi

[Old Cane]

That sounds to me like stuff people (they must, I hear it all the time) buy but since I don't buy any I really don't know I guess.

[Telewanger]

Hum, What is stuff people?

I will look it up in a few minutes.

[Old Cane]

I'll say it again. It sounds like stuff people buy. I can translate to Texan but probably not for where you live.

[Old Cane]

Found it:

stuff/stəf/
Noun: Matter, material, articles, or activities of a specified or indeterminate kind that are being referred to, indicated, or implied.
Verb: Fill (a receptacle or space) tightly with something. More »
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[fezz parka]

Nice song. Vocals are too hot. Good demo though.

[Telewanger]

Cool!

I worked pretty hard on it. There's a lot of stuff going on in it. One acoustic guitar is on the left. The one on the right is playing different strumming and picking notes creating a bouncing effect from speaker to speaker. It was hard to get it right. I panned the vocals and instruments to death, so they are bouncing from speaker to speaker. The piano is going back and fourth. It was lot of work for a pretty simple song. Then I had to line up all of the vocals and pan them, but I think that it turned out pretty well.

[Telewanger]

I will back the vocals off a little. My ears are shot right now. I just finished it, so I can't hear anymore.

[Telewanger]

I just listened to Taylor Swift's music. Her vocals are way out front and you can hardly hear the acoustic guitars at the beginning of some of her songs. I did back the vocals off more. It should be pretty decent now.

I don't care for Taylor Swift, but the girl singing this song likes her music.

[Telewanger]

Here is a better link with two different versions.

http://soundcloud.com/telewanger/tracks

[DMAND]

Sounds great. Great singer. Finger noise (left channel?) is a bit intrusive. Vocals are excelllent, level seemed OK to me. But then I thought the guitar solo was a bit too loud. Must have been mixed by a guitar player! Nice work.