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Talmir · June 27th, 2009, 09:50 PM

Hello.. I´m on a quest to become passable as a blues player.. And for such I need critiques on areas to work on. I posted a song a while back where I was told not to play so carefully and dig more in.. I have been trying to work on that and recorded a little track tonight. If you´d check it out and give me comments and critiques that´d be grand :D

The song:
http://heimur.dk/Music/Tin.mp3

The comments I have gotten so far from my non musically oriented buddies is "practice awesome endings".. useful, heh

Mark N · June 27th, 2009, 10:04 PM

keep working at it Talmir, you will get smoother at it.the track seemed too busy...why not just try one rhythm track and do some lead over it, just two guitars in it...plus your guitar was out of tune to my ear...just keep practicing and working at it....I have been playing over 20 years and sometimes feel like I have only just begun...it can be frustrating but yet at the same time quite rewarding when you get to the next level....:)

Talmir · June 27th, 2009, 10:06 PM

Thank you for your comment Mark :) Must be my fingers, just checked my guitar and its right in tune :P I have that effect on guitars.. Its karma. and yeah, I'll keep to simplicity next time. Always learning ya see.. Still only at the foot of the musical mountain.

Mark N · June 27th, 2009, 10:11 PM

I am not even at the foot yet...lol...you're doing just fine...keep it going

June 27th, 2009, 09:50 PM	#1 (permalink)
Talmir Tele-Meister Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: iceland Age: 26 Posts: 422	Newbie looking for crits :) Hello.. I´m on a quest to become passable as a blues player.. And for such I need critiques on areas to work on. I posted a song a while back where I was told not to play so carefully and dig more in.. I have been trying to work on that and recorded a little track tonight. If you´d check it out and give me comments and critiques that´d be grand :D The song: http://heimur.dk/Music/Tin.mp3 The comments I have gotten so far from my non musically oriented buddies is "practice awesome endings".. useful, heh __________________

June 27th, 2009, 10:06 PM	#3 (permalink)
Talmir Tele-Meister Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: iceland Age: 26 Posts: 422	Thank you for your comment Mark :) Must be my fingers, just checked my guitar and its right in tune :P I have that effect on guitars.. Its karma. and yeah, I'll keep to simplicity next time. Always learning ya see.. Still only at the foot of the musical mountain. __________________

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June 27th, 2009, 10:04 PM	#2 (permalink)
Mark N Tele-Holic Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Woodstock, NB, Canada Age: 38 Posts: 927 9 Photos	keep working at it Talmir, you will get smoother at it.the track seemed too busy...why not just try one rhythm track and do some lead over it, just two guitars in it...plus your guitar was out of tune to my ear...just keep practicing and working at it....I have been playing over 20 years and sometimes feel like I have only just begun...it can be frustrating but yet at the same time quite rewarding when you get to the next level....:)

June 27th, 2009, 10:11 PM	#4 (permalink)
Mark N Tele-Holic Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Woodstock, NB, Canada Age: 38 Posts: 927 9 Photos	I am not even at the foot yet...lol...you're doing just fine...keep it going

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