First Christian song I've recorded....

Hello everyone!! I've been writing some Christian songs here lately and this is the first one I've recorded. This is just a rough mix. I still need to go and re-do the vocals and possibly some of the guitar parts. I would appreciate some constructive critcism on the recording aspects...thanks!!

Heal Me
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=6583300&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=6583300&q=hi

hey... I like the song and message in here...

the song is easy to listen to, and the basic structure is also nice

you seem to have the same trouble with lyrics that I do... trying to cram too many words into your phrases...
I struggle with that often... and it's hard taking them out...

Well...glad to see I'm not the only one! LOL I guess the problem I have is wanting to say one thing, but not knowing how to say it differently without changing the meter and rhyming scheme and all that. Maybe one of these days I'll figure it out!

Thanks for the comments...I really appreciate it!