Since vocals are the focus right now::: the 'seven wonders' verse (~ :22) feels a little rushed. Also the verse around 1:20 to a lesser extent. Might be worth zooming in and making sure your harmony vocals aren't coming in before the lead vocal. Purely personal, but I always like to give the lead the initial attack, with the harmony attack coming however many milliseconds later — not many but just to give the lead that initial attack on the beat. ... If this doesn't pertain, well, drive on!
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