[F6_FullMelt]

I like this recording as well...

I definitely see room for improvement in a few areas, but thats just my ears.
bum notes and bad phrasing? he is aiming for 1968! when jimi rubbed his strat all over his micstand, many people thought 'terrible noise' while many others thought 'how original and intriguing' - I mean, we only know what we like.

This would be a great jump off to work on for a while, rethink a few notes that stick out, smooth over a few areas where the sound harshes harder than others, and maybe thicken that tone up. I liked it though, these are just suggestions meant to help.

keep it up man, I can't build gear or play for more than a few minutes non-stop without getting monotonous and pentatonic-y, so there is nothing for ME to hate on here.