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Not bad at all, but it does sounds maybe a little plain. Definitely try using other parts of the neck. I was thinking that some lower notes would sound better than going higher. You could get some good tele sounds in there. Some open string stuff perhaps. The tone seems a touch thin. What pickup(s) are you using here? Bridge? How about some middle position or neck pickup to add fullness? Or a tube amp! Or play with the pedal's tone control. Also you might try to extend your phrases into almost a solo with a counter melody.
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