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Yeah, good assessment from Dababy. I'll just add that, while you have a very cool motif going on, think of a song as having a beginning, middle, and end. So definitely keep your cool motif run, but at other times, I suggest that you add some other stuff for variety, like maybe Hendrix-type chords/fills or double stops, instead of single notes all the time. And maybe toward the end, build the dynamic/intensity. Also, it might sound better with the neck pickup, but that's just my opinion. Overall though, I enjoyed it!
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